Week 8 slides and feedback











  • Far to casual
  • not properly communicating with the audience through relying on notes for presenting
  • need to have someone else to change slides that is not the person speaking
  • have only 2 people speaking
  • more visuals
  • competitors doesn't do much if your going toshow them would be far more beneficial to have a table comparing the features of your product against theirs
  • free perimeters-time
  • can you not do it from facebook? Where is the beneficial element that requires its operation off facebook?
  • align your dialogue with your on screen narrative to create clear support of your media. Matching the argument with the narratives of the visuals
  • talk about solution from first point
  • How is this scalable? 
  • Prototyping whole thing to gain grounding so time period is to short far better to quote it at a years cost over 3 months
  • Not relying to much on band as first client. Also don't insult them by referring negatively to their style before your involvement.

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